Kia ora Molly, What a clear and entertaining recount of a morning before school. You have used punctuation correctly-well done. You could try using paragraphs to show different parts of your writing. I like the bold font and title and the appropriate images used. I dislike the morning rush so have my clothes and even scarf and jewellery ready the night before school!
Kia ora Molly, What a clear and entertaining recount of a morning before school. You have used punctuation correctly-well done. You could try using paragraphs to show different parts of your writing. I like the bold font and title and the appropriate images used. I dislike the morning rush so have my clothes and even scarf and jewellery ready the night before school!
ReplyDeleteHi Whaea Sue
DeleteThanks for your comment, Having all your stuff ready the night before is a good idea. Have you been in a rush to get to school?
Thanks
Molly :)