Kia ora Molly, What a clear and entertaining recount of a morning before school. You have used punctuation correctly-well done. You could try using paragraphs to show different parts of your writing. I like the bold font and title and the appropriate images used. I dislike the morning rush so have my clothes and even scarf and jewellery ready the night before school!
Kia ora Molly, What a clear and entertaining recount of a morning before school. You have used punctuation correctly-well done. You could try using paragraphs to show different parts of your writing. I like the bold font and title and the appropriate images used. I dislike the morning rush so have my clothes and even scarf and jewellery ready the night before school!
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