Thursday 28 March 2019

Brunner mine poem


Here is a link to hear me read it.
We had to use some poetry language, I used onomatopoeia
 which you see in the second line and Alliteration in the
7th line.
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown28 March 2019 at 12:43

    Great job Molly! Good on you for adding a link to you reading it.
    Can you please change here to hear? If you are listening with your ears you can H(EAR) it.

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    1. Unknown12 April 2019 at 10:56

      Hello Mrs Gully
      I have changed here to hear I don't think I will do that mistake again because I H(EAR) it.

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