WOW! This is a awesome blog post. I really like how you have included some images. I agree, I don't really like there costumes either but there very bright. You have included lots of information on there performance.
My name is Laura and I work for the Summer Learning Journey.
I just heard that you have finished the Summer Learning Journey! Wow - well done!
I spotted this blog post and wanted to leave you a comment as I think you have done a great job of writing a review of the Royal Family's dance performance. Your review is thoughtful and detailed, and your presentation of the review is excellent. This is a great blog post!
I hope you have had a lovely time working through the activities for the Summer Learning Journey - we had lots of fun writing them! What a lot of amazing and interesting people there are around the world, and in NZ!
Please have a look through other SLJ student's blogs and leave them a comment. Remember, you get extra points in the programme for commenting!
Hi Molly, Katelynn here!
ReplyDeleteWOW! This is a awesome blog post. I really like how you have included some images. I agree, I don't really like there costumes either but there very bright. You have included lots of information on there performance.
Katelynn
Hi Katelynn
DeleteThanks for the comment is there anything I could of done better?
Molly
Hi Molly,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Laura and I work for the Summer Learning Journey.
I just heard that you have finished the Summer Learning Journey! Wow - well done!
I spotted this blog post and wanted to leave you a comment as I think you have done a great job of writing a review of the Royal Family's dance performance. Your review is thoughtful and detailed, and your presentation of the review is excellent. This is a great blog post!
I hope you have had a lovely time working through the activities for the Summer Learning Journey - we had lots of fun writing them! What a lot of amazing and interesting people there are around the world, and in NZ!
Please have a look through other SLJ student's blogs and leave them a comment. Remember, you get extra points in the programme for commenting!
Best wishes,
Laura
Hi Laura
DeleteYes I will comment, I want to keep my commenting up over the summer.
Hope you have a great summer
Molly