Personal experience - W.A.L.T: use descriptive language when writing at least a 6 sentence retale of your experience.
Friday hockey game
The bitter cold wind whistling around. You are huddeling trying to keep warm. Running and stretching, slowly getting warm. Playing the game, you run like a cheetah trying to get the ball. Smiling at the sheer joy of it. Cheering when your team scores a goal. Hitting the ball like it is your very annoying brother. Tackling the other team making sure the ball does not hit your foot. Huffing as you run back and forth. Hearing the whistle blow for half time you jog back to your coach. Hungrily eating the oranges.
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