For this activity we had to make a story to tell what is happening in the picture. In our story we had to include descripition. This activity was all right but more difficult to get started as we had to use our imagination.
Next time I think I could describe more of what is in the picture so the reader gets a picture in their minds not just tell where the characters are going.
THE GIRAFFE AND THE GIRL!
“Please stay” whispers the girl as she tries to hold
back tears leading her giraffe. Spotty [the giraffe]
and the girl are feeling sad as he is returning to his
natural habitat.
back tears leading her giraffe. Spotty [the giraffe]
and the girl are feeling sad as he is returning to his
natural habitat.
Spotty has long yellow legs with a yellow spotted
brown body. His tail swishes carefree in the wind,
carrying the whines of Spotty away. At least I will
soon be with my mother thought Spotty as he wanders
along.
brown body. His tail swishes carefree in the wind,
carrying the whines of Spotty away. At least I will
soon be with my mother thought Spotty as he wanders
along.
As they approach the forest where the girl found the
giraffe all those years ago, cold and injured. Now they
can see the young giraffe’s mother approaching.
giraffe all those years ago, cold and injured. Now they
can see the young giraffe’s mother approaching.
Quickly the girl takes off the lead. The young giraffe
approaches his mother. The girl starts crying as the
giraffes slowly walk into the forest, but she knows it is
the best for Spotty.
approaches his mother. The girl starts crying as the
giraffes slowly walk into the forest, but she knows it is
the best for Spotty.
By Molly
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