Wow Molly nice work! This is a very good poem! You did so well to think of all those rhymes! I love how you put in so much effort for every blog post! It must have taken you such a long time to write this!
You are right, it definitely would be relieving to arrive on the moon without reaching any doom! I also think that getting to the moon and back is definitely something people would brag about!
If you had gone to the moon, what do you think it would feel like? I think it would feel really funny to walk without any gravity! I would want to try doing some flips! What are some things you would try if you went into space?
I don't think I would try to many things in case I start floating away and don't have time to grab on to anything. I think it would feel weird. I think I would try to get around doing breaststroke. Thanks Molly
Hi Molly I really like your poem about if you were Neil Armstong I would love to go to the moon and do flips. What would you like to do if you landed on the moon? Keep up the awesome work Noah:)
Hello Molly
ReplyDeleteGood poem what type of poem is it?
Hi Richard
ReplyDeleteIt is a rhyme poem. Moon, Doom time, climb.
Molly
Hey Again!
ReplyDeleteWow Molly nice work! This is a very good poem! You did so well to think of all those rhymes! I love how you put in so much effort for every blog post! It must have taken you such a long time to write this!
You are right, it definitely would be relieving to arrive on the moon without reaching any doom! I also think that getting to the moon and back is definitely something people would brag about!
If you had gone to the moon, what do you think it would feel like? I think it would feel really funny to walk without any gravity! I would want to try doing some flips! What are some things you would try if you went into space?
I love this poem! Well done
Matilda
Kia ora
DeleteI don't think I would try to many things in case I start floating away and don't have time to grab on to anything. I think it would feel weird. I think I would try to get around doing breaststroke.
Thanks
Molly
Hey,
DeleteI didn't even think about floating away! You definitely have a good point. I think that I would tie a rope around my arm so that I know I'm connected!
Matilda
Hey
DeleteYes if I had a rope tied around me I would do so many tricks and stuff like that.
Molly
Hi Molly
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem about if you were Neil Armstong I would love to go to the moon and do flips. What would you like to do if you landed on the moon?
Keep up the awesome work
Noah:)
Hey
DeleteI think I would do flips as well but I would keep a firm grip on a rope because I wouldn't want to float away around space.
Thanks
Molly