Kia ora Molly, this is Elle, again, from the Summer Learning Journey.
You have been so active on your blog and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading through all of your posts!
Ka pai - you have written such an inspiring song! I really like these particular lyrics: “You’ll lose all your fears, then help all your peers.” The reason I like these so much is because it’s not only about encouraging people to try their best, but to also support the people around them - this is a very powerful message to communicate!
I also really like that you mentioned in your previous post that these lyrics are inspired by a song by Mangere College, and that you’ve put your own spin on it! Attribution is very important, and you’ve made it your own in the process!
Well done for stepping it up and including a video of you reciting your lyrics! It’s great to hear your lyrics accompanied by your own voice. Great job!
Keep up the fantastic work Molly; your posts are awesome!
Kia ora Molly, this is Elle, again, from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have been so active on your blog and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading through all of your posts!
Ka pai - you have written such an inspiring song! I really like these particular lyrics: “You’ll lose all your fears, then help all your peers.” The reason I like these so much is because it’s not only about encouraging people to try their best, but to also support the people around them - this is a very powerful message to communicate!
I also really like that you mentioned in your previous post that these lyrics are inspired by a song by Mangere College, and that you’ve put your own spin on it! Attribution is very important, and you’ve made it your own in the process!
Well done for stepping it up and including a video of you reciting your lyrics! It’s great to hear your lyrics accompanied by your own voice. Great job!
Keep up the fantastic work Molly; your posts are awesome!
Mā te wā,
Elle (SLJ)
Hey Elle
DeleteThanks for your positive comment,
Molly :)