Friday, 8 January 2021

Step it up

 I got inspired because this is what summer is for me there are those beautiful flowers, the heat, the sunburn, the ice cream and the fruit.


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Molly, Elle here from SLJ.

    This is a great summer poem! I really like that you’ve used so many great adjectives to describe the heat of the sun. I also really like that you’ve included so many summer activities, like eating ice cream and fresh fruit! That sounds like a great summer's day to me!

    Well done for stepping it up and creating such an awesome DLO! I think the artwork of flowers and fruit add so much colour and character to your poem! Are bananas and cherries your favourite summer fruit? Mine are raspberries and grapes!

    Keep up the great blogging and well done for being so active in the Summer Learning Journey!

    Mā te wā
    Elle (SLJ)

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